Villanelle 1st try -Edit

[Tiger the Lion]

Been reading through some of the practice threads and decided to give the Villanelle a shot. It's rough and I'm not even sure I followed the rules completely. I'm here to learn from you all so just because this is in "mild" doesn't mean my skin is thin. Have at it. Thanks.

I didn’t ask for sun   
 Edit: Mercedes/Milo

 
I didn’t ask for sun today;
let sleeping melancholy lie –
I’ve grown accustomed to the grey.
 
I lie in bed and dream to stay
where brightness can’t pollute my eyes.
I didn’t ask for sun today.
 
My hair and beard have gone the way
of thunderheads in August skies.
I’ve grown accustomed to the grey.
 
The blues are all I ever play;
the low notes may just tell you why
I didn’t ask for sun today.
 
So close my door, then go away
before the glimmer multiplies.
I’ve grown accustomed to the grey.
 
And please don’t ask me out to play
a children’s game in thin disguise.
I didn’t ask for sun today,
I’ve grown accustomed to the grey.

 I didn’t ask for sun
 
I didn’t ask for sun today;
let sleeping melancholy lie –
I've grown accustomed to the grey.
 
I lie in bed and dream to stay
where brightness can’t pollute my eyes.
I didn’t ask for sun today.
 
My hair and beard have gone the way
of thunderheads in August skies.
I’ve grown accustomed to the grey.
 
Blues on vinyl is all I play;
the low notes may just tell you why
I didn’t ask for sun today.
 
So close my door, then go away
before the giddy send their spies.
I’ve grown accustomed to the grey.
 
And please don’t ask me out to play
a children’s game in thin disguise.
I didn’t ask for sun today,
I’ve grown accustomed to the grey.