stAge Fright Edit 1.01 Ella, leah, christophersea
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Hi, Tectak
I struggled with the image of sand running through hands that were so enthusiastically applauding that they were red and swollen.
I get "the sands of time" but we don't use hourglasses any more, and it's a stretch to try and turn a pair of applauding hands into one. Also it's really hard to squeeze and clap at the same time.
I liked 'alone inside our common dread.'
I want to know more about why 'credence left on cue'.
Best, Leah
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RE: Stage Fright Edit 1.0 - by ChristopherSea - 02-04-2015, 11:15 PM
RE: Stage Fright Edit 1.0 - by tectak - 02-05-2015, 01:24 AM
RE: Stage Fright Edit 1.0 - by ChristopherSea - 02-05-2015, 01:30 AM
RE: Stage Fright Edit 1.0 - by ellajam - 02-04-2015, 11:49 PM
RE: Stage Fright Edit 1.0 - by tectak - 02-05-2015, 01:31 AM
RE: Stage Fright Edit 1.0 - by Leah S. - 02-05-2015, 12:42 AM



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