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02-01-2015, 11:38 AM
My inkling is to like this and I like the package with a picture. Two issues may be the "ands" that have been pointed out and the repetition of colors. The colors thing may be an idiosyncratic quirk in my taste though. The sort of repetition leads to a sort of rhetorical profundity, but I think it may sap meaning from the poem (or something like that anyway). Thanks for posting.
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< homeland > - by rayheinrich - 01-29-2015, 11:00 AM
RE: < homeland > - by Tiger the Lion - 01-29-2015, 11:23 AM
RE: < homeland > - by just mercedes - 01-29-2015, 11:46 AM
RE: < homeland > - by rayheinrich - 02-01-2015, 05:29 AM
RE: < homeland > - by Erthona - 02-01-2015, 06:48 AM
RE: < homeland > - by rayheinrich - 02-02-2015, 07:52 PM
RE: < homeland > - by Brownlie - 02-01-2015, 11:38 AM
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