SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons

SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons

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02-01-2015, 01:38 AM

Wouldn't "twice" break the iambic string, as "twice" and "built" are both fairly stretched syllables? Thank you for helping bring my poem to the better state it's now in, tectak Smile

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SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by heslopian - 01-16-2015, 08:10 AM

RE: Sermon on the Destruction of Images - by Kubla Khan - 01-16-2015, 10:17 AM

RE: Sermon on the Destruction of Images - by heslopian - 01-16-2015, 10:55 AM

RE: Sermon on the Destruction of Images - by Erthona - 01-16-2015, 01:42 PM

RE: Sermon on the Destruction of Images - by heslopian - 01-17-2015, 03:48 PM

RE: Sermon on the Destruction of Images - by Kubla Khan - 01-16-2015, 05:12 PM

RE: Sermon on the Destruction of Images - by tectak - 01-16-2015, 07:49 PM

RE: Sermon on the Destruction of Images - by ChristopherSea - 01-16-2015, 11:03 PM

RE: EDITED: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by tectak - 01-17-2015, 07:02 PM

RE: EDITED: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by heslopian - 01-18-2015, 04:50 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by tectak - 01-18-2015, 05:20 AM

RE: EDITED: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by ellajam - 01-17-2015, 09:03 PM

RE: EDITED: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by milo - 01-18-2015, 01:42 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by heslopian - 01-18-2015, 05:57 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by tectak - 01-18-2015, 07:48 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by Erthona - 01-18-2015, 11:10 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by heslopian - 01-18-2015, 04:33 PM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by tectak - 01-18-2015, 07:34 PM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by Erthona - 01-19-2015, 09:45 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by heslopian - 01-19-2015, 12:30 PM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by Leah S. - 02-06-2015, 02:11 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by RiverNotch - 01-27-2015, 07:03 PM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by Leah S. - 01-30-2015, 05:01 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by heslopian - 01-31-2015, 12:42 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by tectak - 01-31-2015, 06:43 PM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by Leah S. - 02-02-2015, 09:40 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by heslopian - 02-01-2015, 01:38 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by tectak - 02-01-2015, 07:55 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by heslopian - 02-01-2015, 08:47 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by tectak - 02-01-2015, 05:33 PM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by heslopian - 02-02-2015, 01:59 AM

RE: SECOND EDIT: Sermon on the Destruction of Icons - by heslopian - 02-03-2015, 11:30 AM

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