01-29-2015, 05:12 AM
Quote:Ella wrote: "I was saying "than vultures reveled his demise."
I'm having the same issues my own work, ear off, huh? "
Evidently not; I always defer to milo on question of meter as he is the resident expert. So I sit corrected, because I just can't stand so long anymore. Plus I prefer to sit on my laurels rather then rest on them. Anyway as regards the following:
"still has two groupings of two non-accented syllables."
I downdgrade that to "one" grouping of two non-accented syllables.
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.