01-28-2015, 05:59 PM
I am wondering if the predetermined is the mood the man is in or a level of drunkenness that once is reached the outcome is sure? I like this poem you don't often see the story from the other side. I like "the witness of a mirror" (there is really no harsher view) and " not even after his fingers probe his own baffling wounds." It seemed a little unclear around the middle with the life he is living now and the life of his history, his mother/ his wife. Good one.