01-28-2015, 04:13 AM
(01-28-2015, 03:01 AM)ellajam Wrote:I would probably use it as a double iambiamb or trochaic inversion but internally the missing stress may not be as bothersome. Let me review a couple poems with it and I will return(01-28-2015, 02:41 AM)milo Wrote:When I move abacus will I need a stres after it, is it just a foot by itself? If discussion of these issues is too basic for this forum let me know and I'll move the thread.(01-26-2015, 08:02 AM)ellajam Wrote: Okay, so I've listened to a bunch of recordings and I think I finally understand, maybe.Well, like I said, it's not a proper rhyme, though many today aren't realm bothered by such things. If your iambs do end up forcing an accent onto /CU's/ it sounds pretty awkward.
I was saying ABaCUS, rhyming cus with fuss. Most readers say ABacus, with some putting just a little stress on cus but not enough to count. You are saying my rhyme should be with the middle syllable? Or the acus. Or really that abacus doesn't fit there at all?
This is the same thing I did with escapades, I hear it with a stress on first and last syllables. That's one of the reasons I need you folks.


