the concrete version looks like someones head 
how about: and i'm not being serious here!
how about: and i'm not being serious here!
Attached to every word as though to compensate are moments summed
and sorted in their turn aglow with light of reason fuming condensate
and sorted in their turn aglow with light of reason fuming condensate
illuminates the pages as it burns seared by the charge
of cliched clause the battle 'twixt wisdom of
vernacular excess and language
made to obfuscate by prattle
rages whilst protagonists
protest there is
no perfect
rhyme no
god-sent
pattern each template
placed is used once then degrades words
are cast like runes upon a river to float or sink like
witches on parade so throw your soul into the soup semantic stir
up the pottage simmer to reduce remember aways taste will be
subjective and that my friend will be your best excuse
making it a more clear image of the chalice by some minor alterations of the the word placements.
making it a more clear image of the chalice by some minor alterations of the the word placements.