Orifice of Isis

Orifice of Isis

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01-22-2015, 09:22 AM

Thanks for the honest critique. I myself felt that the last verse was weak compared to the others and that the meter left a lot to be desired. I wrote this poem after being inspired by the Aleistair Crowley quote "O, how superior is the Eye of Horus to the Mouth of Isis"

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Orifice of Isis - by Nahtaivel616 - 01-22-2015, 01:48 AM

RE: Orifice of Isis - by bena - 01-22-2015, 06:07 AM

RE: Orifice of Isis - by Nahtaivel616 - 01-22-2015, 09:22 AM

RE: Orifice of Isis - by bena - 01-22-2015, 10:39 AM

RE: Orifice of Isis - by Erthona - 01-22-2015, 12:51 PM

RE: Orifice of Isis - by Magpie - 01-24-2015, 03:51 PM

RE: Orifice of Isis - by Nahtaivel616 - 01-25-2015, 03:35 AM

RE: Orifice of Isis - by bena - 01-25-2015, 03:52 AM

RE: Orifice of Isis - by Erthona - 01-25-2015, 06:01 AM

RE: Orifice of Isis - by Erthona - 01-26-2015, 01:58 AM

RE: Orifice of Isis - by Nahtaivel616 - 01-26-2015, 06:33 AM

RE: Orifice of Isis - by Magpie - 01-26-2015, 06:51 AM

RE: Orifice of Isis - by Erthona - 01-26-2015, 11:08 AM

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