Interesting Definition of a Crime
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Dale,

Thanks for bringing this story to my attention and in that sense your poem has done it's job. It's simple almost childlike structure gives it even more poignancy when read with the knowledge of the story.

I'll just mention that your link didn't work when I tried it and then I noticed that in the address bar that it had an extra http at the end of it for some reason. But I managed to find your originally intended page for the link 
http://blog.sfgate.com/sfmoms/2015/01/20...ed-cancer/
I hope you don't mind that I've posted the link here in my post just so that people can have access to the story until you get back to fix it... As it is a very moving story that defies logic.
I thought it was very clever journalism the way they ended the piece by stating that the little girl was now on morphine.
Hopefully the public will kick up enough of a fuss that the powers that be act with common sense and the two can be reunited as soon as possible.
Thanks for posting this,

Mark
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Interesting Definition of a Crime - by Erthona - 01-21-2015, 05:44 AM
RE: Interesting Definition of a Crime - by Magpie - 01-21-2015, 09:41 PM
RE: Interesting Definition of a Crime - by bena - 01-22-2015, 10:43 PM



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