01-21-2015, 08:12 PM
(01-21-2015, 05:35 PM)Nahtaivel616 Wrote: I would like to see some more metaphors, and the overuse of the title phrase took away some of the power for me.I'm not sure how the OP could use the advice of "I would like to see more metaphors". Please try to be more specific. Thanks, ella/mod.
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