01-20-2015, 04:32 AM
This was a very fun poem to read. Great imagery was its strongsuit. Sort of 'you're the boy/girl momma warned me about' sentiment to it, but that could be entirely subjective. Its subjectivity combined with the imagery, and the illusion of orderliness in its stanzas...create the cumulative effect. What that may be or was intended to be, is anyone's guess.
