01-20-2015, 02:46 AM
(01-19-2015, 11:31 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: BracedI like mmm because it makes me feel the situation is enjoyable though difficult to the N. I think the last line is already said in the title, I don't think you need it. You could consider a period or semicolon after the last dream and drop the and. Just a thought.
Mmm,
the moment I met you
dream begat dream begat dream
and I knew
it wouldn't be easy.
I braced myself for this.
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