01-19-2015, 10:35 PM
Hi, Chris, why don't you start the conversation off with your own ideas so far?
The first thing I noticed was the immediacy of the voice in the first and how removed from the situation the narrator of the second seemed.
The first thing I noticed was the immediacy of the voice in the first and how removed from the situation the narrator of the second seemed.
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