Swinging Soliloquy
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(01-15-2015, 10:06 AM)Brownlie Wrote:  
(01-15-2015, 09:57 AM)tectak Wrote:  
(01-15-2015, 09:43 AM)Brownlie Wrote:  I like the screaming bit, but found the nightmare somewhat distracting. However, that seems to hold up quite a bit of the actual events of the poem. Perhaps my greatest triumph here is spotting what appears to be a typo on lips.
Thanks as always brownlie but what is the typo? I need to know. Botox, cross-dresser with gender challenge in gay (ended) relationship. Bugger, now you know!
Best,
tectak
Iips instead of lips.
Huh? Err...are you OK?
Concerned,
tectak
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Messages In This Thread
Swinging Soliloquy - by tectak - 01-15-2015, 08:22 AM
RE: Swinging - by Brownlie - 01-15-2015, 09:43 AM
RE: Swinging - by tectak - 01-15-2015, 09:57 AM
RE: Swinging - by Brownlie - 01-15-2015, 10:06 AM
RE: Swinging - by tectak - 01-15-2015, 04:35 PM
RE: Swinging - by tectak - 01-15-2015, 09:28 PM
RE: Swinging - by ellajam - 01-15-2015, 11:37 PM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by tectak - 01-16-2015, 01:05 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by ellajam - 01-16-2015, 01:27 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by tectak - 01-16-2015, 01:54 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by Leah S. - 01-16-2015, 08:24 AM
RE: Swinging - by Leah S. - 01-16-2015, 01:11 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by tectak - 01-16-2015, 01:30 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by Leah S. - 01-16-2015, 01:33 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by ellajam - 01-16-2015, 01:44 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by tectak - 01-16-2015, 08:15 AM
RE: Swinging - by Erthona - 01-16-2015, 01:43 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by Erthona - 01-16-2015, 12:27 PM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by tectak - 01-16-2015, 05:19 PM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by Erthona - 01-17-2015, 03:24 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by just mercedes - 01-17-2015, 11:33 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by tectak - 01-17-2015, 04:52 PM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by heslopian - 01-18-2015, 05:54 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by tectak - 01-18-2015, 06:09 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by heslopian - 01-18-2015, 07:21 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by tectak - 01-18-2015, 07:33 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by heslopian - 01-18-2015, 07:37 AM
RE: Swinging Soliloquy - by tectak - 01-18-2015, 07:41 AM



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