Killer Riff In A Flat

[Magpie]

volumn up
house below
for sale again

Love your title, been enjoying the ku. I also like your title for Paul's, or wah wah.

Have a great new year.

Thank you, I'm so pleased that you mentioned the title because I was wondering if anyone noticed, I only came up with the title just as I was posting as well. Thanks...
And also for Paul's ku, I'll go with your title of 'Wah Wah'... It's all the better for its onomatopoeic (No I didn't copy+paste... Yeah, ok I did) qualities.

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WAWA UP

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Love it!  My neighbors think there human sacrifices at my house. (probably know this if you listened to my son's version of my poem)--so killer is absolutely right!

Personally I don't think you need "the big fat" ---heavy is the only adjective needed, and it has that wonderful double entendre going for it.


My bass
is heavier
than it looks.

Thank you for the comments... It sounds like your neighbours love you just as much as mine love me, my neighbours have even phoned the police to tell them how much they love me. And to show my appreciation I play them songs even louder.
Also, I agree with you about dropping "the big fat", (I thought I was DJ'ing in a club when I wrote that part). Thank you for revealing an extra part to the poem with the double entendre that was hidden inside "the big fat"

Much appreciated.

Mark