Sonnet First Draft
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His wife, as thin and tensioned as a wire,
Gets woozy when the needles puncture him.
She jerked and left, her spine a rod of ire,
Because I touched his tubes; her mouth went grim;

And pacing in the hall, she looked for aid,
From anyone professionally trained.
She turned, and God, her face was like a blade!
Her whole demeanor timid rage restrained.

How could I tell her now about the past?
I taught him what I know of Bushido,
In face of fear to hold his courage fast,
No matter how unfair, to face his foe.

He was my student, but he taught me more.
I won't hold on to all that came before.
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Sonnet First Draft - by Leah S. - 01-05-2015, 05:46 PM
RE: Sonnet First Draft - by tectak - 01-05-2015, 06:30 PM
RE: Sonnet First Draft - by Leah S. - 01-06-2015, 08:22 AM
RE: Sonnet First Draft - by just mercedes - 01-06-2015, 04:35 AM



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