In the Beginning

[Leah S.]

I've just gone and rewritten a bunch of my haiku based on this forum topic. I found myself ruthlessly cutting words. I think in this haiku you need an emotion word that connects the two subjects. It'll be tough, because you have to imply nostalgia and disappointment together. It also occurred to me that you could eliminate the names (that need explanation) and just go with "my first browser." You could just use "this" to refer to the search engine you despise.... as in the well known phrase "....better than this!"
It did make me smile. Have you looked up the funny computer haiku on the internet?

"Serious error.
All shortcuts have disappeared.
Screen. Mind. Both are blank."

-- Ian Hughes