Uncertainty
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You know, it's funny, but I just don't trust this guy.
It reads like a story, and the title seemed to imply that the narrator doesn't trust the person who is asking for money.
I'm not sure about the line breaks. I can't see the poem because I'm editing this post. I will go back and comment more.
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Uncertainty - by cotidiano - 12-30-2014, 03:09 PM
RE: Uncertainty - by Leah S. - 01-03-2015, 02:49 AM
RE: Uncertainty - by milo - 01-03-2015, 03:18 AM
RE: Uncertainty - by Erthona - 01-03-2015, 04:47 AM
RE: Uncertainty - by cotidiano - 01-03-2015, 05:16 AM
RE: Uncertainty - by Leah S. - 01-05-2015, 05:10 PM
RE: Uncertainty - by somnium - 01-05-2015, 05:17 PM



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