01-01-2015, 09:16 AM
Hi, dw, I think you could lose the and. The first line might be more effective if it was an image of how you pour your soul out instead of just telling me you do.
Have a wonderful new year.
ella
Have a wonderful new year.
ella
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips