12-31-2014, 03:59 AM
(12-30-2014, 06:09 PM)gypsypickles Wrote:I believe the quoted lyrics are by Ray Lamontagne. Always best to credit the author when quoting, especially on a site where we post our own work. It avoids confusion.(12-30-2014, 06:07 PM)tectak Wrote:No this is a song I was quoting my reply is below that .(12-30-2014, 05:34 PM)gypsypickles Wrote: "Trouble...and your point is?
Trouble, trouble, trouble, trouble
Trouble been doggin' my soul since the day I was born
Worry...
Worry, worry, worry, worry
Worry just will not seem to leave my mind alone
I swear this worry won't leave me alone "
Rich or poor we all have the same worries and troubles great or small it's there but the way we comfort ourselves is what makes us different . What a rich man may see as just a common everyday thing or materialistic item . Is viewed differently thru a poor man's eyes .
Sorry, I mean is this your poem and is it in the right forum.
Best and welcome,
tectak
If you want it moving just say the word.
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