Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella)

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[b]Pancakes in the Stream [/b](edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and ella)

 
Pancake ice is nice,
so round just like your moon pie face,
my dear. I know the image is there
so clear. It seems it’s been misplaced
I fear. My mind is melting away.

-Original-

Pancakes in the Stream
 
Pancake ice is nice,
so round just like your moon pie face
my dear. I know the image is there
so clear. It seems it’s been misplaced
or seared. My mind is melting away.
 
–Erthona
 
 
 Ice Pancakes
 
 
©2014

The "my dear / so clear" makes this sound too much like "This is Just to Say"….my three cents. Instead of prunes, we have Ice Pancakes. I like both poems. But still...