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because the dead don't wear shoes

just mercedes
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12-30-2014, 07:11 AM

I like your whimsical poem - apart from the last line, which doesn't satisfy me, somehow.

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because the dead don't wear shoes - by milo - 12-30-2014, 06:53 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by just mercedes - 12-30-2014, 07:11 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by milo - 12-30-2014, 07:21 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by rayheinrich - 12-30-2014, 07:16 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by tectak - 12-30-2014, 08:16 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by milo - 12-30-2014, 08:20 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by rayheinrich - 12-30-2014, 12:22 PM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by Erthona - 01-01-2015, 04:43 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by milo - 01-02-2015, 03:43 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by rayheinrich - 01-02-2015, 06:08 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by milo - 01-02-2015, 11:21 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by Kara Mahaffey - 01-02-2015, 10:28 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by ellajam - 01-02-2015, 11:08 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by Erthona - 01-03-2015, 01:19 AM

RE: because the dead don't wear shoes - by milo - 01-03-2015, 02:31 AM

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