12-29-2014, 09:43 AM
(12-29-2014, 09:05 AM)just mercedes Wrote: milo - those line breaks were trying to chop up the lines, show groping for the words. I'll think about changing them though.I think it can be difficult to convey groping for words. For me, I couldn't differentiate between the deliberately poor line breaks signifying the groping and the undeliberate poor line breaks I run across on this site daily but perhaps it works for other readers.

