12-29-2014, 05:01 AM
First go here. I found myself writing it like a song with melody, maybe something I should stop doing.
Maybe it should be rhyming more?
I always said I could see, now i'm going blind
chasing that great dream while you just sit there and smile;
no change from summer or winter just endless time
write it all down in a book then tear out the pages
but why bother when you can just burn the book;
then start again planting new seeds of hope
but with no lesson learnt you bury them into the sinners soil;
like a ship lost in a stormy sea
with no hope of touching that delicate ground.
You've forgotten it's feel and you've lost your name
Oh if only you knew what experiment can do.
Maybe it should be rhyming more?
I always said I could see, now i'm going blind
chasing that great dream while you just sit there and smile;
no change from summer or winter just endless time
write it all down in a book then tear out the pages
but why bother when you can just burn the book;
then start again planting new seeds of hope
but with no lesson learnt you bury them into the sinners soil;
like a ship lost in a stormy sea
with no hope of touching that delicate ground.
You've forgotten it's feel and you've lost your name
Oh if only you knew what experiment can do.

