It may be raining, but we don't have to go outside

[amiwrite]

Please keep in mind I am using this as a spoken word piece, but it may also appear as a paper copy.
--first critique-able draft.
It may be raining, but we don’t have to go outside

Let me be the remedy for the season,
it may be raining, but we don't have to go outside.
Take the flow and slow dance in our arms,
and just take a bath in it.
You can be the scented candle,
we can be the flame.
Don't worry about the rain, we don’t have to go outside.

We can bundle up, and sing our song.
We can dance forever, the night is long
and we can pretend it’s a saturday, because there's nothing I’d rather do
than spend the day with you.

You're more than work, and more than play,
so lets relax and take a day.
I’ll bring you chocolate, we melt worries away.
Everything is so expensive, we don’t have to go outside.

Make our walls bloom with colors,
make our colors vibrant,
vibrant like our romance,
romance like a supernova.

Lets let the rain start a beat.
Heat it up, pick a cup, lets erupt.
I want to hear you singsong all day,
we can pingpong back and forth,
you’re my rebirth.

So sing us a song, take my hand...dance along;
angels are our spot light.
Let this day be long.
We don’t have to go outside.

I have never been a fan of love poetry, only because of common cliches that so often appear when associated with love and romance. I feel as though this was meant to be a personal piece and I can not take that away from you, if it holds meaning who am I to object to that? I feel as though this piece would work exceptionally well as a song.