Poetry floats (need a title)
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I think it is impossible to find the proper title for poems such as this without understanding the background of the author him/herself. While I view myself as at least having basic grips in science, religion, philosophy and politic - especially in the middle east - ultimately, it is not my perspective that is needed to give this poem a title, only the author can.

As for the body of this poem, I must admit that I don't understand a thing apart from some very general ideas emanated from the stanzas.

One thing that caught my eyes, is the line:

Juggled from Nazareth to Nigeria, mercy struggles.


Somewhat strange to connect a line from a city to a whole country. Is it for artistic sake only or is there a deeper meaning to it? My bet is in the first as I don't see any correlation that unites the two within the context of current situation in the middle east.
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Poetry floats (need a title) - by just mercedes - 12-26-2014, 04:59 AM
RE: Poetry floats (need a title) - by none - 12-26-2014, 09:11 PM
RE: Poetry floats (need a title) - by ellajam - 12-26-2014, 10:21 PM
RE: Poetry floats (need a title) - by Leah S. - 12-27-2014, 02:17 AM
RE: Poetry floats (need a title) - by just mercedes - 12-27-2014, 04:08 AM
RE: Poetry floats (need a title) - by ellajam - 12-27-2014, 05:53 AM
RE: Poetry floats (need a title) - by Leah S. - 01-03-2015, 02:53 AM
RE: Poetry floats (need a title) - by rayheinrich - 12-27-2014, 06:59 AM
RE: Poetry floats (need a title) - by Leanne - 12-27-2014, 07:16 AM
RE: Poetry floats (need a title) - by Leanne - 12-27-2014, 07:24 AM
RE: Poetry floats (need a title) - by just mercedes - 12-27-2014, 07:36 AM
RE: Poetry floats (need a title) - by Erthona - 01-03-2015, 07:37 AM



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