Newbie's lament
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(12-23-2014, 03:32 AM)Leah S. Wrote:  TecTak, Tec Tak, Mercedes too,
And Billy. Oh and yes, Leeanne....
I like this PigPen place, I do!
I braved my fear of cliquish ban!

I diligently read and  marked your work
In honest, careful, thoughful crit!
Refrained, I did, from causing irk
By posting some pre-polished bit.

So please unbend and share your worth
Ignored, bereft, I fear your mirth!
Ah what the hell, you're doing well,
you make good crit and do your bit
to make pigpen your happy home;
so keep on crittin', strut your stuff,
I for one can't get enough.
I have to make home rhyme with poem
to finish this before new year;
forgive me but, what's wrong with Leah?

Best,
tectak
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Messages In This Thread
Newbie's lament - by Leah S. - 12-23-2014, 03:32 AM
RE: Newbie's lament - by ellajam - 12-23-2014, 04:07 AM
RE: Newbie's lament - by tectak - 12-23-2014, 04:52 AM
RE: Newbie's lament - by ellajam - 12-23-2014, 04:58 AM
RE: Newbie's lament - by just mercedes - 12-23-2014, 05:56 AM
RE: Newbie's lament - by shemthepenman - 12-23-2014, 09:32 AM
RE: Newbie's lament - by Leanne - 12-23-2014, 09:57 AM
RE: Newbie's lament - by milo - 12-23-2014, 12:25 PM



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