12-22-2014, 03:49 PM
(12-21-2014, 07:39 PM)ellajam Wrote: Hi, I enjoyed this, 'tis the season.Yes I like that a lot, thanks! I think I'll make it the title as I don't think "Sales Pressure" adds anything you wouldn't get from reading the poem.
You might want to consider adding one more line, using "cold feet", or use it as a title, it has a nice double meaning here. Thanks for posting this, Happy winter solstice.


