Cold Feet (Ellajam's title)
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(12-21-2014, 07:39 PM)ellajam Wrote:  Hi, I enjoyed this, 'tis the season. Smile

You might want to consider adding one more line, using "cold feet", or use it as a title, it has a nice double meaning here. Thanks for posting this, Happy winter solstice.
Yes I like that a lot, thanks! I think I'll make it the title as I don't think "Sales Pressure" adds anything you wouldn't get from reading the poem.
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Cold Feet (Ellajam's title) - by Wjames - 12-21-2014, 04:16 PM
RE: Sales Pressure - by ellajam - 12-21-2014, 07:39 PM
RE: Sales Pressure - by Wjames - 12-22-2014, 03:49 PM



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