Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella)

Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella)

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12-22-2014, 02:19 PM

Ellajam,

Thanks for commenting, could you elaborate on what you mean by "the ending just lied flat for me"? So if you could explicate this idea I would appreciate it.

Thanks,

Dale

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Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by Erthona - 12-21-2014, 02:02 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by makeshift - 12-21-2014, 03:00 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by TimeOut - 12-30-2014, 08:58 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by Erthona - 12-21-2014, 07:56 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by ellajam - 12-21-2014, 08:14 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by Erthona - 12-22-2014, 02:19 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by Wjames - 12-22-2014, 04:19 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by ellajam - 12-22-2014, 09:02 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by Erthona - 12-23-2014, 12:21 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by ellajam - 12-23-2014, 09:06 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by billy - 12-23-2014, 09:39 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by billy - 12-23-2014, 09:40 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by tectak - 12-23-2014, 10:34 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by Erthona - 12-24-2014, 05:20 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by 71degrees - 12-31-2014, 01:24 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by Erthona - 12-31-2014, 09:16 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by RiverNotch - 02-02-2015, 01:16 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by Erthona - 02-02-2015, 04:34 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by tectak - 02-03-2015, 06:50 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by Erthona - 02-03-2015, 07:17 AM

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