12-22-2014, 08:24 AM
The title threw me off this so it took a couple of reads for it to sink in, my first read was one of built up shoes and cerebral palsy and the human instinct to stare at something different, something struggling. My second read was one of a young girl in a tight skirt struggling in high heels and the human instinct to stare at the white flash of a bunnies tail. The caught butterfly in a spiders electrical web is a great image on the close.
A couple of points:-
Her sandals, with their inches-think soles...is a bit of a mouthful and needs some attention / shortening
the internal rhymes of tiny teeters testing are a lesson to us all.
Thanks Keith
A couple of points:-
Her sandals, with their inches-think soles...is a bit of a mouthful and needs some attention / shortening
the internal rhymes of tiny teeters testing are a lesson to us all.
Thanks Keith
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