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Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella)

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12-21-2014, 02:02 AM

[b]Pancakes in the Stream [/b](edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and ella)

Pancake ice is nice,
so round just like your moon pie face,
my dear. I know the image is there
so clear. It seems it’s been misplaced
I fear. My mind is melting away.

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Pancakes in the Stream

Pancake ice is nice,
so round just like your moon pie face
my dear. I know the image is there
so clear. It seems it’s been misplaced
or seared. My mind is melting away.

–Erthona

Ice Pancakes

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How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

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Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by Erthona - 12-21-2014, 02:02 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by makeshift - 12-21-2014, 03:00 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by TimeOut - 12-30-2014, 08:58 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by Erthona - 12-21-2014, 07:56 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by ellajam - 12-21-2014, 08:14 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by Erthona - 12-22-2014, 02:19 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by Wjames - 12-22-2014, 04:19 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by ellajam - 12-22-2014, 09:02 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by Erthona - 12-23-2014, 12:21 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by ellajam - 12-23-2014, 09:06 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by billy - 12-23-2014, 09:39 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by billy - 12-23-2014, 09:40 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream - by tectak - 12-23-2014, 10:34 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by Erthona - 12-24-2014, 05:20 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by 71degrees - 12-31-2014, 01:24 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by Erthona - 12-31-2014, 09:16 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by RiverNotch - 02-02-2015, 01:16 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by Erthona - 02-02-2015, 04:34 PM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by tectak - 02-03-2015, 06:50 AM

RE: Pancakes in the Stream(edit 0.001 Billy, Tom, and Ella) - by Erthona - 02-03-2015, 07:17 AM

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