FIFA
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(06-17-2014, 12:19 PM)Jimmy Stark Wrote:  Starving Brazilians do not pity those sporting neckties,
grumbling stomachs and hot hips cannot sympathize.
Rats stacked in ghettos
displaced by impenetrable stadiums in the name of Samba.
Some children learn their letters,
they earn theirs in blood.
Familial Robin Hoods stealing for survival,
more likely to have a .45 than $.45. Perhaps this line should just be "more likely to have a .45 than .45 I think that the $ us distracting and the reader would be able to understand without it.
Soon to peddle outside forgotten mega projects,
preying on unsuspecting glittery tourists.
I really like the idea of this poem. It is a great idea and very controversial.
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FIFA - by Jimmy Stark - 06-17-2014, 12:19 PM
RE: FIFA - by billy - 06-17-2014, 04:35 PM
RE: FIFA - by ChristopherSea - 06-18-2014, 01:41 AM
RE: FIFA - by Jimmy Stark - 06-18-2014, 01:55 AM
RE: FIFA - by billy - 06-18-2014, 10:38 AM
RE: FIFA - by justcloudy - 06-19-2014, 06:59 AM
RE: FIFA - by i pray to pills - 06-23-2014, 09:10 AM
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