I Hate Her:

I Hate Her:

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#18

12-14-2014, 11:35 AM

Like someone stated earlier, it would add even more ambiguity to reform the last line with " I put the bitch down". Assuming that you don't have a problem with profanity that is. I personally just don't like the 2nd edit's last line because it removes that ambiguity. Unless I'm missing something...but great poem lol definitely one to remember.

I'm tired of everyone wearing the same ego./
They're like hoards of sheep, but a Mind is plain lethal./

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I Hate Her: - by billy - 05-11-2012, 06:04 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by billy - 05-12-2012, 06:02 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by Philatone - 05-12-2012, 07:12 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by abu nuwas - 05-14-2012, 06:48 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by billy - 05-14-2012, 11:07 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by Erthona - 05-14-2012, 07:31 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by billy - 05-15-2012, 05:51 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by stb1931 - 10-31-2014, 07:49 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by SimikPK - 10-31-2014, 10:45 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by Tiger the Lion - 11-01-2014, 01:08 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by billy - 11-01-2014, 07:09 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by SimikPK - 11-01-2014, 08:24 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by vagabond - 11-18-2014, 09:46 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by paranoid marvin - 11-19-2014, 08:08 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by billy - 11-19-2014, 06:27 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by azure - 11-19-2014, 06:31 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by bgre9184 - 12-11-2014, 12:22 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by amiwrite - 12-28-2014, 12:19 PM

RE: I Hate Her: - by Voker101 - 12-14-2014, 11:35 AM

RE: I Hate Her: - by alatos - 12-24-2014, 03:14 AM

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