Whats Perfection

Whats Perfection

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12-14-2014, 11:13 AM

I found your poem to be pretty good. Some of the "tion" parts got a little repetitive and seemed too easy but the (slant)rhyme scheme was set up nicely.

I'm tired of everyone wearing the same ego./
They're like hoards of sheep, but a Mind is plain lethal./

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Whats Perfection - by TheCoach757 - 02-26-2013, 12:09 AM

RE: Whats Perfection - by PoetryAndPhysics - 02-26-2013, 01:11 AM

RE: Whats Perfection - by Todd - 02-26-2013, 02:00 AM

RE: Whats Perfection - by tectak - 02-26-2013, 02:03 AM

RE: Whats Perfection - by TheCoach757 - 02-26-2013, 05:46 AM

RE: Whats Perfection - by Todd - 02-26-2013, 05:50 AM

RE: Whats Perfection - by TheCoach757 - 02-26-2013, 06:45 PM

RE: Whats Perfection - by Voker101 - 12-14-2014, 11:13 AM

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