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Trouble
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12-11-2014, 11:46 AM
It is assumable that anyone who reads this can reflect back to their own mischief childhood so I found the topic of the poem to be good. My own bit of advice (though myself am a novice) I think the rhyme pattern would be best to use the ABAB pattern often seen by Shakespeare in the majority of his sonnets. Personally I find poems that have an AAAA BBBB AAAA etc. pattern to be dull and often leads me to not finish reading it. Hope this helped!
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RE: Trouble - by Erthona - 11-30-2014, 08:24 AM
RE: Trouble - by tigrflye - 11-30-2014, 01:54 PM
RE: Trouble - by Brownlie - 11-30-2014, 03:26 PM
RE: Trouble - by ellajam - 12-02-2014, 09:14 PM
RE: Trouble - by tectak - 12-04-2014, 06:31 AM
RE: Trouble - by Beacherjosh - 12-04-2014, 11:32 AM
RE: Trouble - by Ribo - 12-04-2014, 12:48 PM
RE: Trouble - by tectak - 12-04-2014, 04:37 PM
RE: Trouble - by jsoutiere92 - 12-07-2014, 03:04 PM
RE: Trouble - by Erthona - 12-11-2014, 07:38 AM
RE: Trouble - by bgre9184 - 12-11-2014, 11:46 AM
RE: Trouble - by Erthona - 12-12-2014, 06:39 PM
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