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The Creep edit e^-1
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12-06-2014, 01:21 PM
(12-06-2014, 01:18 PM)ellajam Wrote:  I like that "one" can apply to any of those things. For me that is the fine strength of the opening. It is the haunting, empty "one".

I agree!! It just depends on how you want your audience to interpret your poem.
--BeacherJosh
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The Creep edit e^-1 - by QDeathstar - 12-02-2014, 01:19 PM
RE: The Creep - by billy - 12-02-2014, 08:29 PM
RE: The Creep - by paulcanuck - 12-02-2014, 10:06 PM
RE: The Creep - by Eluoh - 12-05-2014, 11:54 AM
RE: The Creep - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2014, 12:45 PM
RE: The Creep edit e^-1 - by ellajam - 12-05-2014, 09:29 PM
RE: The Creep edit e^-1 - by Beacherjosh - 12-06-2014, 11:44 AM
RE: The Creep edit e^-1 - by QDeathstar - 12-06-2014, 12:46 PM
RE: The Creep edit e^-1 - by ellajam - 12-06-2014, 01:18 PM
RE: The Creep edit e^-1 - by Beacherjosh - 12-06-2014, 01:21 PM
RE: The Creep edit e^-1 - by ellajam - 12-06-2014, 01:46 PM



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