It may be raining, but we don't have to go outside

[Beacherjosh]

Thank you Qdeathstar! My audience is mainly, my girlfriend, but also read on open mic. I was so caught up in my hopeless romance lines, I did not catch a lot of these lines that do not make sense. I do need to clarify my use of "we". Also, the colors will be taken out; Ive been told before that it doesn't suit the poem. What did you find intriguing about the last few lines? maybe I can build off of it.