Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make
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       the first time
       you were all thumbs      
       but towards the last
       you fixed them quickly
       to those crosses      
       while i just sat here
       wondering how much it hurt
       and it was only later
       long after they were dead
       that you began
       to fill their mouths with words
                                                                                                                                all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?
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RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by just mercedes - 12-03-2014, 03:49 PM
RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by rayheinrich - 12-04-2014, 02:32 PM
RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by SaddestStates - 03-26-2015, 07:55 PM
RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by Raakim - 04-10-2016, 06:49 PM
RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by Raakim - 04-11-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by kevplunk - 07-25-2016, 05:49 PM
RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by Duke Doon - 07-31-2016, 05:47 AM
RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by e_a_g_l_e_p_i - 10-26-2016, 03:56 PM
RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by gracekent16 - 10-29-2015, 11:43 AM
RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by rowens - 04-05-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by rowens - 04-06-2013, 05:06 AM
RE: Five Common Mistakes That Novice Poets Make - by Castugi - 11-22-2016, 10:19 AM



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