The Moon Eats Me in My Living Room

[paulcanuck]

Hey - I've looked over your poetic license and I can see that it is in good standing. No grammar policing from me here because of its apparent validity.

This:

louder in the earth
than my ears.

appears to mean something, which to me, is more important than actually meaning something.
Also:

Only me and it remain

runs afoul of our English teacher's glare, but - just double-checking - yes your license is still valid so it works perfectly
and

uncompleting each other

para 3 section B.1 says it's OK to make up words as long as the meaning is conveyed.
Notwithstanding, the only nit I have here is the phrase

off the off

Nothing in your permit allows that. Oh wait, maybe the notwithstanding clause...
cheers
Paul