The Moon Eats Me in My Living Room

[rayheinrich]

My critique of the abstractions isn't that they exist, it's that they aren't cohesive.

Our definitions of suitable abstraction differ, which was the point of my post.
I think the degree of cohesiveness you require pushes the abstraction too far towards linearity
eliminating much of the poem's beautiful diversity of meanings.

We're probably just using different glues. Mine's cyanoacrylate based (specifically: 2-octyl ).