Love(Explicit)

[tectak]

I gave my love roses today
As a symbol of my love

Because that's what she expects
From every Christmas, birthday, girly magazine,
And time she heard "I put a roof over your head!"

Hugs and words mean nothing
Since they have no value or use

And when we got home she sucked my dick
Because that's what she owes me
Because I showed her I loved her

Is there anything wrong with that?

First of all, a question. Is Love(explicit) the title? Perhaps it should be.
Poetically now, this needs work. A line by line would probably be worthless because I deduce from the lackadaisical use of poetic, if not grammatical, exactitude that the message is all. If so, then well done. It is a single thought....thoughtless perhaps...expressed in prose, cut up in to random stanzas, punctuated very badly, bizarrely nodding to some style of observed "poems" from fifty years ago in that every line is capitalised and yet without any attempt to use imagery, metaphor or alliteration.
The use of "from" L2, S2 is jarring. From Christmas, from birthday, from girly magazine, from time she heard? No. Rework.
Sentiment? I question the effort but only on the grounds of shallowness.
Best,
tectak