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androgynous
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11-28-2014, 03:50 AM
Those are good ideas about this poem, if it is a poem, and if the speaker in the poem is a girl. I don't know about the problem with the repetition at the end, there are other repetitions throughout it. I'm glad you took time and effort with it. The speaker spends a lot of time looking at girls.
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