11-25-2014, 11:46 PM
thanks for all critics and interpretations.
liz11, you´re right, i meant it´s toxic to realize having trapped oneself but still not being able to let go.
the poem is an exaggeration, but sometimes I slightly feel that way.
Hi 71degrees!
if it looks as if I were trying to be futuristic, thats unwillingly.
"THe last stanza makes me think you´re stuck in a bad Poetry forum or something and can´t get out undefined"
You tell me. I don´t mind.
But you´re right, I am not so well with the last lines myself.
liz11, you´re right, i meant it´s toxic to realize having trapped oneself but still not being able to let go.
the poem is an exaggeration, but sometimes I slightly feel that way.
Hi 71degrees!
if it looks as if I were trying to be futuristic, thats unwillingly.
"THe last stanza makes me think you´re stuck in a bad Poetry forum or something and can´t get out undefined"
You tell me. I don´t mind.
But you´re right, I am not so well with the last lines myself.