three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change)

[azure]

it's to imply  a break pause and anything else that helps the reader see two parts to the thing. we have a fair few read ups in this forum that may help as far as haiku's go. while line length and number can or may be changed, (for me) without the seasonal word and the change in direction it's just another line of poetry. back to the dash. it isn't really needed but it does sometimes help the reader spot the break, as we all know, readers can be almost as bad as writers

good efforts though

Gonna go check em out. I would have to say that "modern haiku" is just a cop out in regards to writers (such as myself) being too lazy to implement proper form. The seasonal word really does embody the "true" nature of haiku, yet I find that form can be a hindrance at times for whatever craps out of me creatively. I will master this form dammit!   I wish