11-25-2014, 01:41 PM
I really liked the line "I turn around embraced by my Creator, my Father". Love the imagery here of turning a corner that I didn't get on my first couple of read-throughs. I question of the word choice of "stress break point" in line 4 though, it just felt a little bit strange to me as I read it but that may just be me. Love the message you conveyed here and I am impressed that this was your first post. I am new here too and you seem like you have a lot of talent for writing and great inspiration. Please keep going!!