Mama 'Ku

[azure]

crowded bus
pregnant
preoccupied
she gives up her seat

I think you should use the second version of this piece, by cutting L1. I like this scene, it sheds light on the beauty of a woman in the process of bringing life into this world. Shes preoccupied with the joys of her unborn child. Noticing that, in our hectic, non-stop society is very vital and important I think. I enjoy your work.

Azure