The Iceberg:

The Iceberg:

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11-25-2014, 06:32 AM

Hi Filiocht!

I second what folks have said about making your verse more ear-friendly. Sounding clunky to the ear makes the reader (me, at least) less inclined to delve more deeply into it.

nb

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The Iceberg: - by Filíocht - 11-21-2014, 06:30 AM

RE: The Iceberg: - by azure - 11-22-2014, 03:03 PM

RE: The Iceberg: - by milo - 11-23-2014, 02:07 AM

RE: The Iceberg: - by Filíocht - 11-22-2014, 11:53 PM

RE: The Iceberg: - by Isaias - 11-23-2014, 12:15 AM

RE: The Iceberg: - by Filíocht - 11-23-2014, 12:50 AM

RE: The Iceberg: - by Filíocht - 11-25-2014, 04:00 AM

RE: The Iceberg: - by milo - 11-25-2014, 04:21 AM

RE: The Iceberg: - by nb - 11-25-2014, 06:32 AM

RE: The Iceberg: - by ExpressionofZero - 12-13-2014, 11:35 PM

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