Eternal Turn Around

[vagabond]

I pray.
I breathe.
I feel the blanket of shame
Entrapped in a stunning stress break point
Layered from years of lies
Lies from the entangled mesh of a smile/frown twist.
Years of forgetting that I have a voice.
Years of forgetting that I have my choice.  
On my knees beneath His sky, I rise.                                       I would find it interesting what made you rise again
Refusing to regret one step in truth.                                              ... and why one should ever regret steps towards truth
I turn around embraced by my Creator, my Father, my God.       it is illogical that you turn around when you were walking towards truth before
Unwrapped to my life-breathed face.               
I know His voice, I feel my choice           You know the voice of GOD, o.k. then give the reader a glimpse of it!
I forget my pain and beat my heart.        why do you beat your heart?
Consume His Love forever light                
My breast expands, a sanctuary, now.          
I can forget, He has and did.                     maybe it should be "I can forgive, ..." instead "forget". and why do you say "he has AND did"? GOD either has forgiven (too) or did forgive.  you could write something like "He always did"

I live, the infinite - Heaven IS.                   

this gives me lots of questions instead of carrying me along your spiritual chorus of praise. but i admit that would be hard for every poem.