11-23-2014, 11:59 PM
thanks to all critics. Based on that i edited.
mother
we measured every element
down to your iron core we scanned
but who you are is long forgotten
secret gardens reaped and rotten.
your name´s denied and undermined
by invented gods and false commands,
our warrant to despoil your limbs.
the answer that you give is grim.
we´re self-aware but cancerous sprouts,
germs ovlivious to our ground.
we ache cause we do
share your wounds.
mother
we measured every element
down to your iron core we scanned
but who you are is long forgotten
secret gardens reaped and rotten.
your name´s denied and undermined
by invented gods and false commands,
our warrant to despoil your limbs.
the answer that you give is grim.
we´re self-aware but cancerous sprouts,
germs ovlivious to our ground.
we ache cause we do
share your wounds.

